Influencing The Development of Student Writing


One of the great challenges we face as teachers of writing is learning to observe student writing with a view that encompasses instruction. The trick is to look closely at the writing of an individual to notice what that writer needs and at the same time consider other students who may be faced with the same direct need in the development of their writing. 



Patterns of need frequently emerge as you confer with your students. When this happens you may find that you need to develop a teaching focus for the whole class, or a small group. It will not surprise you to learn that this is the perpetual challenge of the Writer’s workshop.

 Once your students are writing regularly and displaying increased stamina and engagement, you may find yourself asking questions –

 What happens now?
What should I do to most effectively move their writing forward?
What do I say to them when I join them for a writing conference?

 It is easy to look at a student’s writing and immediately jump on the secretarial aspects and teach into that. The surface features of the writing are so obvious, but they remain just a part of the teaching whole.  

 It is important for your initial response to any student’s writing to be directed towards what they have done well in the piece under consideration.

 You may find that many of your writers will develop writing pieces that contain multiple ideas within the one piece of writing. The writing may lack a clear focus.

 To assist students, consider the following strategies:
Using a published piece or a student exemplar, where the writer has remained focused on the one topic, have students identify how the writer remained focused. What strategies did the writer use?
Encourage students to rework their  own writing using the same strategies as seen in the mentor text. An alternative could be to write a new piece that is focused on the one topic or idea. The idea being to zoom in on a particular idea and expand that.
Share a piece of writing you have completed and talk through your thinking, highlighting how you kept yourself focused on the topic and developed your idea.
If one of your students needs help with this issue of focus, you could enlist the participation of the class or a small group who could ask questions and offer suggestions. The assisted writer could make notes with your help and then use these ideas to further develop the writing piece.

 Helping Writers Find the Emotional Self
Some young writers will produce writing pieces that tell only the external story –what happened, what they saw. They write about the physical world, without linking it to the emotional world of the character.  – how they feel or what they thought. You may show before and after samples of writing in which this inside/outside strategy is used. You may choose to model this for them in a personal narrative of your own.

 What’s Important Here?
Sometimes student writing fails to demonstrate or recognize what’s important. All the events are given equal attention or emphasis. To assist your student writers to develop a sense of what’s important, choose a short text your students are familiar with and have them identify the parts where the writing clearly demonstrates the importance of certain events.

 Here are some other issues that may emerge as writing develops.

 The Challenge of the Blank Page and the Blank Look

 Remind students to use their lists/ topics as a writing ‘spark.’
Suggest they think about what is happening in their lives right now that is making them happy, sad, frustrated, worried etc
Remind them to think about others stories they have heard recently that might relate to their lives.
Encourage the rereading of earlier pieces to see if there is more that can be said. They may also look for ideas that connect to the earlier piece of writing.
Have them read a book to spark ideas they could write about.

 ‘I’m Finished” -Stamina/Endurance runs out after just a few lines

 Encourage students to talk about their writing. Help them to notice they have more to note about the topic than they initially thought.. Have the writer talk to a writing partner who has endurance –someone who could help them to focus. Remind them of the expectations of their writing community and encourage them to persist

 Same Topic, Different Day

 Encourage the student to write about the topic in a different way. A different genre perhaps.
Encourage the student to discover different things to say about the topic
Encourage the student to add more ideas to their topic lists
Increase awareness of the range of ideas other writers in the class are exploring.

 List- like Entries day after day

 Talk to the student about what is really important about the ‘list of events’ and assist them to choose one to write about. Encourage working with a partner and compare entries to delve into events with greater detail.
Share notebook entries that approximate the kind of writing you want to see from the writer.
Use sticky notes to assist the student to ‘tease’ out important ideas to include in the writing piece.

 Students Use Their Notebooks Ineffectually or Inappropriately

 Continue to show students  effective examples of notebook use. 
Underline the notebook's importance as a writing resource.
Reinforce the notion of the notebook as a place to collect, experiment, and explore writing. 
Articulate and model the high expectations for notebook use.

 Student Choose Topics to which they have little knowledge or connectedness

 Engage students in a conversation about the items on their topic/ideas lists in an effort to identify the most important ideas. The ideas to which they have a stronger connection or deeper knowledge base.
Encourage students to talk to other students about the kinds of things that are providing a ‘spark’ for their writing.
References:

 The No Nonsense Guide To Teaching Writing Judy Davis and Sharon Hill, Heinemann, 2003

 What a Writer Needs. Ralph Fletcher, Heinemann 1993

 Mentor Texts -Teaching Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-6
Lynne Dorfman & Rose Capelli, Stenhouse, 2007

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