Preparing Student Writers to Write PERSUASIVELY PART 2

So, clearly  teaching students to write persuasively, to influence a reader is about more than WRITING to a formula or recipe!

What is the First Step?

We need to introduce young writers to the language of Persuasion

The language of introduction

I believe, I feel, I think,

The language of connectives

however, therefore, because, although, yet, in addition to.

The language of conclusion

In summary, I recommend, In conclusion

In the classroom we begin by fostering quality conversations
A sea of talk should pervade classroom discussion and conversation around pertinent issues. Talking to learn should be a guiding principle in planning lessons. Successful discussion requires students to reflect on what they are doing as learners.  If students  dont know the process of discussion they remain dependent on the teacher to tell them what to do, how to solve problems and how to think.

Developing Opinions:

Ample activities involving talking and listening, arguing and persuading provide opportunities to offer opinions, and defend them. This is vital grounding to engage in thinking.

 Activities That Support Developing Opinions

4 Corners

Encourage the development of opinions and thinking about issues. Identify an issue in the news, or an ethical dilemma. Ask students to assume a position on the issue. Students move to a particular corner of the classroom based on their individual viewpoint.
The 4 corners correspond to the following:
Strongly agree                                                                   
Strongly disagree                                                                  

Students move to the area that corresponds to their view, then defend their position on the issue. They move if convinced by the arguments put forward in the discussion. This activity is recommended because it:
*takes little preparation
* encourages thinking
* develops opinions across a range of issues.

Once a week have the students vote on an issue.
They write either YES, NO or MAYBE on a piece of paper without any prior discussion  Form a horseshoe with the yes side and no side facing each other and the maybes at the top of the horseshoe. The teacher stands in the middle. Students are only allowed to talk. The teacher tosses a ball alternatively to all members of each side. Students express their opinion and give a short address as to why they feel that way. Once everyone has voiced their opinion, ask if anyone has changed sides. If they have, they move and then say why.
Play Horseshoe as a lead in activity before actually requiring students to write on issues. After a few weeks, you can extend the game into an opportunity to write.

Partner Debates

Pair off students and ask them to present an agreed point of view on a variety of issues. -Opinions must be backed up by evidence.

News Views
Use news articles concerning current issues to discuss. Divide the class into two groups, (for and against) then defend a position.

Time to Talk
Over a period, (two weeks) have each student  prepare a short talk defending a particular position and present it to the class.

Assessing Student Thinking to Guide Further Modelling and Instruction


Do students ask fruitful questions?

Do students consider reasons/evidence?

Do students seek explanations?

Do students explore alternatives?

Do students engage in self correction?

Do students stick to the point when defending a position?

Do student clarify meanings?

Do students make distinctions?

Do students make comparisons?

Do students provide examples?

Do students make relevant inferences?

Do students make considered judgements?

Interaction in Discussion:

Do students listen to each other?

Do students share the discussion?

Do students assist each other in discussions?

Do students explore disagreements?

Do students show respect for opposing views?

Conversations around Literature that Help Both Reading and Writing.

Many students read without questioning a text or analyzing the author's viewpoint. Encourage students to question the author (QTA) and analyze a text. By thinking out loud about our own thinking we show students how to consider:

the author's purpose,
multiple viewpoints, possible gaps in the text.
We can assist students to develop stronger viewpoints by reading related or opposing versions of the same tale/topic/ issue. Assist students to recognize that there are not only different versions of a story, but also different viewpoints to consider.

Tomorrow, I present the third part of this presentation, where we immerse students in the actual writing.


  1. Hi Alan - I'm a bit slow - just found your blog. Today's topic is very timely for me! We have been doing a lot of thinking about persuasive writing as well. I love your suggestion about preparing them through discussions. Great activity ideas! I will tune in again tomorrow. Hope all is well - Sherri


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