tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post650562368052704045..comments2024-03-26T21:25:46.348+11:00Comments on Living Life Twice: Slice of Life Story- Capturing The ConversationAlan j Wrighthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-35307852039530709502021-08-23T18:56:50.965+10:002021-08-23T18:56:50.965+10:00Someone Sometimes with visits your blog regularly ...Someone Sometimes with visits your blog regularly and recommended it in my experience to read as well. The way of writing is excellent and also the content is top-notch. Thanks for that insight you provide the readers! <a href="https://www.new-zealand-visa.co.nz/iw/%D7%95%D7%99%D7%96%D7%AA-%D7%90%D7%AA%D7%90-%D7%A0%D7%99%D7%95-%D7%96%D7%99%D7%9C%D7%A0%D7%93" rel="nofollow">אשרת ETA ניו זילנדית</a><br />wk seohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09688817949744189709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-60035026070320235832021-08-23T18:03:24.114+10:002021-08-23T18:03:24.114+10:00I admire this article for the well-researched cont...I admire this article for the well-researched content and excellent wording. I got so involved in this material that I couldn’t stop reading. I am impressed with your work and skill. Thank you so much. <a href="https://www.india-visa-online.org/ja/visa" rel="nofollow">インドのビザ</a><br />Ross Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16844708560868033421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-52187759303862924612020-07-25T12:57:21.809+10:002020-07-25T12:57:21.809+10:00Tidbits indeed Chris. I think you're onto me w...Tidbits indeed Chris. I think you're onto me with your mention of 'future reference.' I have just submitted a manuscript to this end- hopefully.Alan j Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-26920704060923856642020-07-24T01:56:15.633+10:002020-07-24T01:56:15.633+10:00Oh, my! "Brain-draining", the juxtaposi...Oh, my! "Brain-draining", the juxtaposition of fear of insects and a sense of humor with killing people...all tidbits worth jotting down for future reference. You could make a complete story out of any of these!Chris Margocshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18261261993571716230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-33792019061999131722020-07-22T09:19:07.035+10:002020-07-22T09:19:07.035+10:00That particular quote is a favourite of mine too. ...That particular quote is a favourite of mine too. Unintended humour at its best. May you go forth and gather conversations. Have fun in the collection zone.Alan j Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-79999951417778932592020-07-22T09:16:11.603+10:002020-07-22T09:16:11.603+10:00My favorite was "I walked in the kitchen and ...My favorite was "I walked in the kitchen and mum's head was on the table." I laughed out loud. I need to practice gathering conversation. Thank you for this inspiration!Marilyn Minerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15796997722805292448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-29758928413840427922020-07-22T09:13:59.246+10:002020-07-22T09:13:59.246+10:00The use of colour to separate each of the utteranc...The use of colour to separate each of the utterances provides them with their own identity and helps to make the collection more reader friendly. Thanks for noticing Fran. It is interesting what appeals to the reader and how this might be influenced by experience or exposure. I do indeed miss the eavesdropping. It was so easy before...Alan j Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-60322830743506065822020-07-22T09:09:28.426+10:002020-07-22T09:09:28.426+10:00Thank you Maureen. Your fiction projection makes f...Thank you Maureen. Your fiction projection makes for interesting possibilities...Glad you enjoyed these snippets.Alan j Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-39188832143991942362020-07-22T09:07:54.013+10:002020-07-22T09:07:54.013+10:00As much as we exhibit individual traits, we also s...As much as we exhibit individual traits, we also share commonality in parts of our writing process. As you stated, it is good to know other writers are doing the same things, particularly at this challenging time. Alan j Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-53152515833306047862020-07-22T04:19:41.921+10:002020-07-22T04:19:41.921+10:00I love these! Your use of color in the typeface he...I love these! Your use of color in the typeface helps the reader with the breaks between voices.<br />My favorites are the centipede story, and the strength of language in "As soon as money was mentioned, she were there..."<br />Don't you miss eavesdropping? Gold nuggets for writers.Franhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08093868039798031083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-2396435533115779922020-07-22T04:03:29.933+10:002020-07-22T04:03:29.933+10:00These are terrific! It is especially delightful to...These are terrific! It is especially delightful to see them all together - imagine what kind of wild fiction piece would include all or most of these - ha! I particularly liked, "‘I border drink from the shop.’ So punny!Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404917167112072640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3915339669985059502.post-65147350274687963792020-07-22T00:07:11.013+10:002020-07-22T00:07:11.013+10:00Thank you for sharing some of the dialogue. I went...Thank you for sharing some of the dialogue. I went through some of my notebooks during the lockdown as well. Some feelings reemerged that were difficult but the process is interesting. I am glad to know that other writers are doing the same. Tbreithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06443482734738300820noreply@blogger.com